Panel Review

## Proposed Panel

**Draft:** [title or slug]
**Context:** [piece_type] for [audience], currently at [stage]

Based on this context, I recommend:

| Reviewer | Why |
|----------|-----|
| **[name]** | [One-line rationale tied to piece context] |
| **[name]** | [Rationale] |
| **[name]** | [Rationale] |
| **[name]** | [Rationale] |

**Not including:**
- **[name]** — [Why not relevant for this piece]
- **[name]** — [Why not]

Proceed with this panel, or adjust?

[Spawn in parallel:]
- Task: nemesis-reviewer with draft
- Task: mom-reviewer with draft
- Task: hemingway-reviewer with draft
- Task: sorkin-reviewer with draft

## Draft

[full draft text]

## Context

piece_type: [from context or inference]
audience: [from context or inference]
stage: [from context or inference]
goals: [from context if present]

## Reviewer Outputs

### nemesis-reviewer
[full output]

### mom-reviewer
[full output]

### hemingway-reviewer
[full output]

[etc.]

User: /cw-panel

Agent: I'll convene a panel to review your draft. Let me read it and check the status.

[Reads draft]
[Loads the brief and project context: personal essay, general audience,
 revision stage, goal: "make it land emotionally without being sappy"]

## Proposed Panel

**Draft:** father-and-the-sea
**Context:** essay for general audience, revision stage

Based on the context—personal essay aiming for emotional impact without
sentimentality—I recommend:

| Reviewer | Why |
|----------|-----|
| **mom** | General audience check. Will flag where you lose non-insiders. |
| **sedaris** | Personal material that might benefit from more specificity or humor. |
| **sorkin** | Revision stage—check if pacing is tight. |
| **nemesis** | The emotional claims need to be earned, not asserted. |

**Not including:**
- **hemingway** — The prose reads clean; economy isn't the issue here
- **hitchcock** — Not a tension-driven piece
- **vonnegut** — Structure is solid; this needs polish not fundamentals

Proceed with this panel, or adjust?

User: Add hemingway actually, I think it might be overwritten

Agent: Adding hemingway. Running the panel now.

[Spawns 5 reviewer agents in parallel]
[Collects outputs]
[Spawns panel-synthesizer with draft + context + all outputs]

## Panel Synthesis

**Panel:** nemesis, hemingway, mom, sedaris, sorkin
**Piece context:** essay for general audience, revision stage, goal: emotional
impact without sappiness

---

### Consensus Findings

| Issue | Flagged By | Recommendation |
|-------|------------|----------------|
| Opening two paragraphs are slow | sorkin, hemingway, nemesis | Cut or restructure—start closer to the boat |
| "He taught me everything" is unearned | nemesis, sedaris | Show what he taught, don't declare it |
| Section 3 gets abstract | mom, sorkin | Ground it in a specific moment |

---

### Productive Tensions

**Tension: The fishing gear paragraph**

> "His tackle box was a museum of failures—rusted lures from the '70s, a reel
> that hadn't worked since Reagan, hooks that had never caught anything but
> his own thumb."

| Cut it | Keep it |
|--------|---------|
| **hemingway:** 47 words that could be 15. "His tackle box held decades of failure" does the job. | **sedaris:** This is the most alive moment in the piece. The specific details are doing real work. |

**What's at stake:** The piece aims for emotional impact without sappiness.
Specific, wry details (sedaris) might be the path there. But if they slow
momentum, they work against the goal.

---

### Unique Insights

- **sedaris:** "There's a joke hiding in the part about him never admitting he
  was wrong. You're circling it but won't commit."
- **nemesis:** "Your ending asks the reader to feel something you haven't set
  up. The 'I finally understood' move is unearned."

---

### Recommended Priorities

1. **Restructure the opening** — Three reviewers flagged this. Start on the
   boat, not before it.
2. **Earn the ending** — The emotional payoff needs setup. Show what you
   finally understood through a scene, not a declaration.
3. **Decide on the tackle box** — Genuine tension. Your call based on what
   you're optimizing for.

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### The Hard Question

> What specifically did you learn from him that you couldn't have learned from
> anyone else? Multiple reviewers noted you assert the relationship's importance
> without showing what made it irreplaceable.