Six-skill presentation system: ingest talks into a rhetoric vault, run interactive clarification, generate a speaker profile, create presentations that match your documented patterns, produce the deck illustrations + thumbnail visual layer, and publish talk pages to a Jekyll shownotes site. Includes a 111-entry Presentation Patterns taxonomy (81 observable: 62 patterns + 19 antipatterns; 30 unobservable: 21 patterns + 9 antipatterns) for scoring, brainstorming, and go-live preparation.
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Take each load-bearing claim and walk it around four standing questions — what exactly?, how does it work?, who does it hit?, where does it lead? — then revise until the talk answers all four. Any room large enough to be interesting contains all four questions, and a claim defended in one register only lands with the fraction of the room that speaks it.
Every speaker has a default register. Ask a data-minded engineer why their approach is right and you get a benchmark; ask a designer and you get a story about a user; ask an architect and you get a diagram of where it all leads. Each answer is correct and each is partial, and the speaker rarely notices the partiality — the register they reach for is the one they find convincing, so a talk built entirely in it feels complete from the inside.
It is not complete from the outside. A conference room holds people who want to know the number, people who want to know the sequence, people who want to know who gets hurt, and people who want to know what it means in five years. Give them one of the four and three-quarters of the room is politely waiting for their question to be answered. They will not raise a hand about it. They will conclude the talk was fine and forget it.
The Walk-Around is a preparation audit borrowed from Ned Herrmann's Whole Brain Communication Walk-Around. Herrmann labels the four as quadrants — A (Analyzer), B (Organizer), C (Personalizer), D (Strategizer) — and the labels are worth keeping because a chunk of any business audience has met them. What this catalog imports is the procedure, not the psychology:
Herrmann's own worked example is a one-sentence corporate statement — "it is our strategic intent to double this business in the next five years" — walked around four ways. A asks double what — revenue, headcount, profit? B asks with what reorganization? C asks does this mean doubling everyone's workload? D asks and then what, is there a plan past year five? Four questions, one sentence, and the sentence was ambiguous on all four. The revised version answers each. The procedure is mechanical and that is its whole value: it does not depend on the author's judgment about which questions matter, which is precisely the judgment their default register has already corrupted.
The vocabulary is a handle, not a theory. Nobody is a quadrant. This catalog does not import Herrmann's brain model, his physiological grounding, or the HBDI instrument — and know-your-audience.md's "Learning Styles Are a Myth" applies here with full force. The Walk-Around is not the meshing hypothesis and must not be mistaken for it: meshing says identify a person's style and tailor delivery to it, which has no evidential support. The Walk-Around says assume the room is heterogeneous and cover everything, which identifies nobody and tailors to no one. Coverage and matching are opposite moves, and only the second one was ever debunked. What the pattern needs to be true is that audiences differ in what evidence persuades them — which is uncontroversial, well-supported, and old enough that Aristotle divided it into ethos, pathos, and logos.
Herrmann's book contains a contradiction worth resolving before applying it, because the two halves prescribe opposite things.
Ch. 8 says cover all four quadrants for every significant point. Ch. 13 tells the story of a Whole Brain leadership program taught to engineering faculty at MIT, CMU, and Berkeley, where the model was introduced as a colorful, metaphor-driven visual — and the audience rejected it. As the facilitator put it, the walls went up: they read a metaphor literally, analyzed it as a claim, and found it wanting. Re-introducing the identical model as "a first-order engineering approximation to mental diversity" changed the response dramatically. That is not coverage. That is matching — same content, re-registered.
Both are right, and the discriminator is the room's spread:
The failure mode of matching is the more dangerous of the two, since homogeneity is usually assumed rather than verified. "They're all engineers" is a statement about job titles, not about what persuades them, and the engineer who asks who does this affect exists in quantity. Verify the spread through know-your-audience before betting the talk on it; when in doubt, cover.
Note what the MIT move is not. It is not leet-grammars — the facilitators did not change their vocabulary, they changed the epistemic form of the argument, from metaphor to approximation. A speaker can deploy flawless insider jargon and still lose a room by offering the wrong kind of justification.
Run the Walk-Around during architecture and again during content, on the talk's load-bearing claims only. It is an audit, not a template: a talk that answers all four questions about all twenty of its claims is a talk nobody has time to sit through. Three or four claims carry a talk; walk those around.
Use it hardest on the claim you are most confident about, since confidence is the tell for default-register blindness — the claim that needs no defense is the one you have only ever defended one way.
Use it in any talk aimed at getting something adopted rather than admired. Adoption requires the B and C answers (how does it work, who does it disrupt), and those are the two that technical speakers cut first.
Avoid mechanical application to every sentence; the Walk-Around is a filter for the claims that matter. Avoid it as an audience-typing exercise — the moment it turns into "the C-quadrant people in the back need a story," it has become the meshing hypothesis with extra steps and should be stopped. Avoid the coverage form in a genuinely homogeneous room, where it dilutes.
The vault should look for register spread across a claim's defense, not for the vocabulary:
_anti_golden-rule.mdUse strong_evaluable_from, evidence_requirements, and not_evaluable_when above to evaluate positive evidence.
Current catalog artifacts may support positive detection only. Because absence_evaluable_from is null, no delivery video, transcript, rendered or native deck, comparison artifact, or claim of full coverage authorizes an absence finding; when no positive signal is established, record not_evaluable, not absent.
Relates to Dimension 9 (Persuasion Techniques) as the primary axis — the pattern is about what counts as proof to whom, which is a persuasion question rather than a structural one. Relates to Dimension 4 (Audience Interaction) through audience modeling, the same pairing know-your-audience carries.
Walk-Around is the systematic counterpart to inoculation, and the two are worth holding apart. Inoculation voices one objection — the strongest, steel-manned — and answers it on stage as a persuasion move. Walk-Around answers four standing questions nobody has voiced yet, and it operates in preparation: it changes what gets built rather than what gets said about opposition. A claim that survives the Walk-Around often needs no inoculation, since the objection inoculation would have addressed was usually a register the talk had simply omitted.
It depends on know-your-audience for the spread read that decides coverage-versus-match, and the two compose directly: know-your-audience supplies who is in the room, Walk-Around decides what each of them needs to hear. It is distinct from leet-grammars (vocabulary and belonging) — Walk-Around governs the form of the justification, not the words.
It pairs with concrete-before-abstract, which is frequently the vehicle for the C answer — a human consequence lands as a story, not as a bullet. It feeds crucible and peer-review: both are review passes, and the Walk-Around gives a reviewer four specific things to look for rather than a general request to find problems. Its direct inverse is _anti_golden-rule.md — a talk built entirely in the speaker's own preferred register is the null case of this pattern.
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